Second Double Page Spread Draft

This is my second draft. I have managed to make some of the improvements that my first draft lacked, these include the page numbers, the sizing and the credits. To follow the house style of my magazine, I decided to make the page numbers light blue, as this is a common style throughout my magazine. This is important as my double page spread tends to go in a different direction in terms of colour, so by changing the page number colours, I have maintained the house style. Another improvement I made was the sizing of the 'Summer' title. I felt as if more space should have been used around it and this was the only solution, I also feel it looks more conventional now due to the fact that the artist's name needs to be bold and eye-catching. The last improvement I made was adding the writer and photographer credits. Although I plan to move them for my third draft. Improvements I need to make include using up some more space in the left page by the image. I am thinking of using that space up by creating my artist's upcoming album cover and placing it there with some text stating the date this particular album will be released.