This is my first draft. Overall, I am pleased with this as it conveys all of my initial ideas from the pre production process. As for improvements, I feel there is a lot of empty space that I could use up with other features, or I could just rearrange and enlarge my current features. Also, I feel that the alignment is not correct in some ways with the text and the boxes, this could do with some tweaking. I will aim to make these improvements for my second draft.
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